jlamlam

引用:

原帖由 joel_25 於 2009-5-12 07:26 發表
yes i am one of the member (or the only one) study in England
good to have english corner in here.. easier for typing liness" />liness" />

actually mao mao, do u need assistance for this section ...

Although, I have not been studying in oversea, my suggestions for the above sentences are as follows::
1 study > studying 2 corner (delete in)  here 3 Frankly, Mao Mao, do you need any assistance for this section?

jlamlam

May I add some supplements: 2.1) focus on the point of contact and 2.2) concentrate the power when hitting th ball.

jlamlam

引用:

原帖由 joel_25 於 2009-5-12 16:41 發表


thanks, but i juz want to ask are we correcting every single grammar and in what way?
because i don't think ppl will say frankly in general conversation, it is pretty formal to me

Pls refer to post 3 for your question.
Originally, I want to write "Frankly speaking" to replace your word "actually", because it does not make sense in your sentence. It seems it is a typical "Chinese English". I just want to use one word to replace one word that makes sense.

jlamlam

I totally agree with Ms. Ngan and Mr. Riccardo.

Their English standard are much better than me. I am just an old office boy not a teacher. You can see I just have corrected one post but not the others. I would like to reiterate the view point of Mr. R that correctness and formality are entirely different thing, we, especially the student studying oversea or local, should be aware of .

[ 本帖最後由 jlamlam 於 2009-5-13 10:38 編輯 ]

jlamlam

引用:

原帖由 (=^x^=) 於 2009-5-12 18:23 發表
i don't know if jlamlam is an english teacher, i just know his TT skill is excellent......HUGE DRAGON KILLER

My new idol the "King of Evil - Mao Mao"

jlamlam

引用:

原帖由 james007 於 2009-5-13 15:29 發表


For you 野田 妹妹, I am happy to teach you anything you want....  

Being a teacher, it is very easy to date student, especially beautiful 妹妹, to...........

jlamlam

Please do comment on my English Usage.