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Hero is a subjective word.In my mind,i think a hero is someone who have done somethink very great for the human being.
I think Napoleon is absolutely a hero.He is a excellent militarist.He had took part in more than 60 wars.
He brought French people glory.He defeated the coalition formed by the European in 1800.
After this,more and more people supported him.His military strength grew rapidly after.
In 1805 the European powers joined together against France.During 1805 to 1807 his army defeated Austria,Russia and Prussia.
But in 1807,Napoleon loss in the war Peninsular War.His dash dropped and He loss the war Russian Campaign too.
But he is still a excellent militarist,and he is a good emperor too.
He's excellent legal system,road system,public construction and he brought glory to the French,It brought great impact for French after ages.
Even you or she think he is not a hero , French people does it.
