petlover70

“Hero” is a subjective word. In my own thinking, a hero is someone who has done something grateful for the human race.
I think that Napoleon is an absolute hero. He is an excellent militarist who had taken parts in more than 60 wars.
He brought glories to the French people. He also defeated the coalition formed by the European in the year 1800.
After that, he has more and more supporters; his military strength grew rapidly since.
In 1805, the European powers joined together against the French. During 1805 to 1807, his army defeated Austria, Russia and Prussia.
But in 1807, Napoleon lost in the Peninsular War. His dash had dropped, and lost the war for the Russian Campaign too.
But he is still an excellent militarist, and he is a good emperor too.
His excellent legal systems, road systems and public construction had brought glories to the French, and dedicated great impacts to the French people for many years after.
Even though you might not think that he is a hero at all, but he is always a hero in the French peoples' mind.

(其實我都唔係太明白你既 foundation....不過你可以睇吓以上改動是否幫到你) ?

[ 本帖最後由 petlover70 於 2008-2-18 22:29 編輯 ]

petlover70

介意講你是幾多年級嗎 ?

petlover70

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原帖由 nganhot2 於 2008-2-19 12:30 AM 發表
呢句我可以接受：
I think Napoleon is absolutely a hero.

但係唔明點解呢句要用preset tense:
But he is still an excellent militarist, and he is a good emperor too.

我會覺很佢仲在生Ｏ羅！咁改會唔會 ...

嘻嘻, 如果真係要改, 其實有好多處都要改, 不過唔想改佢原創既foundation, 所以....係咁易合格就算數了:)

But he is still the most excellent militarist and the greatest emperor that I know.
(the most excellent....錯了在雙重意義標準, 或者可以改為 ~ But he is still the best militarist and the greatest emperor that I know.
OR ~ But he is still an excellent militarist and the greatest emperor that I know.)
是用現在的睇法去形容過去既英雄

[ 本帖最後由 petlover70 於 2008-2-19 00:47 編輯 ]

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原帖由 瑤瑤 於 2008-2-19 12:33 AM 發表


F. 4 or F. 5 ?

希望唔係啦:lol (我估係F.2 OR F.3)

petlover70

Both Tony & Tommy are more than helpful,
but I don't think he needs the BEST solution here....
(assumed that he only wanted something REASONABLE)
I'm sure that all our comprehensive options above will help for a while. :)

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原帖由 nganhot2 於 2008-2-19 03:47 PM 發表

同意:victory:
同學仔交功課，我地唔應該幫佢改咁多。
為佢好，只需提出個人覺得非改不可的錯處，由佢自己考慮應唔應該採用。
如果唔係，我地會全部都變成免費“快槍手“:L

係架....以前讀U時幫人做essay係要收錢架:lol